Post by zucpy on Apr 2, 2012 15:52:47 GMT -3
Hello all! I am posting this to show you a small example of my previous role play characters and how much thought I put into them. There are two characters I will display. It contains history, favorite food, and some other things that were required for the forum. This was when around 5-6 years ago and I am not going to edit it so please be kind with my grammar haha.
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first character
Full Birth Name: Kiyoshi Scott Cole
Nicknames: Kee
Birth date: September 4, 1993
Age:15
Power: to be able to look into the past/future of anyone's life, but occasionally he can’t change the future no matter what he does.
Appearance
Eye Color: light-Blue
Hair Color/Look: medium-length white hair with light-blue highlights. Athletic with light-brown colored skin.
Height:5' 5"
Weight:155
Other Characteristics: Crossed-shaped scar on his right arm. Knows martial arts and can handle a Katana pretty well
Personality
Favorite Foods: Grilled cheese and LOVES Swiss-rolls
Fears: Afraid to get to close to anyone because he fears he might not be able to protect them from their future. He is terrified of fire.
Goals: To try to find a way to change the future for the people he loves if they are in danger. Also to try to find his father.
Likes: Grandpa, friends, quiet and peaceful places, nature, and sparring.
Dislikes: People who think they are better than everyone else.
Talents: Awarded, “Best youngest fighter” in his hometown.
Habits: Stutters when he is around girls.
Reputation: in his hometown, he is known as one of the best fighters but in the town he lives in now, he is known just as an average, quiet boy.
General Personality: Very quiet and keeps to himself. Kind, gentle, and peaceful. Has a VERY hard time talking to girls. He is always focused on what he does and helps out the needy whenever he can.
Family: His Guardian, Jacob (he calls him grandpa), just recently died.
Parents: Mom is dead, dad is not to be found.
Siblings: Maybe...
Other Relatives: He might have a brother out there somewhere…
History
Childhood: Kiyoshi’s hometown is very archaic. His mom died instantaneously when he came out of her womb. The dad proclaimed that his boy was cursed and placed him on an old guy’s doorstep. This old guy, named Jacob, raised him and called him Kiyoshi because he was always quiet and kind. Jacob, being a master at martial arts, trained Kiyoshi to be strong so he could protect himself. At age 5, Kiyoshi woke up one night and told Jacob that he had a horrible nightmare that he saw millions of birds flying south and then their whole town perished from a storm of fire. Jacob thought nothing of this and they continued their lives training everyday. When Kiyoshi was around 13, he told Jacob he started seeing events happening ahead of time and noticed they started coming true. One day, Jacob saw endless amounts of birds going south. Jacob remembered Kiyoshi’s dream and rushed Kiyoshi to go out of town to get some special items that only the other town. Kiyoshi obviously forgot about the dream he had when he was little and thought of this trip as nothing. Jacob handed him a list of items and Kiyoshi left. When Kiyoshi got to the next town, he read the list that Jacob gave to him. It read “Continue to use your powers to protect the ones you love. Destiny will show you the way. I always loved you Kiyoshi and always will. You‘ve made me so proud. Stay strong my boy. Goodbye.” Kiyoshi ran as fast as he could to get to back home. When he arrived to the outskirts of his town, he saw that fire was coming from the air. As his town was being burned to the ground, all he could do was stand and watch and wonder why these things were happening to him. Suddenly, he remembered seeing this in his dream when he was little. He clutched the piece of paper that Jacob wrote to him close to his heart and walked away…in tears.
Most Embarrassing Moment: When a girl tried to help him up after he fell on the street. He ran away, blushing and ran into a wall.
Happiest Moment: When his grandpa would take him fishing.
Life Changing Experiences: When had to move to the next town…its more advanced than his ever was.
second character
Full Birth Name: Serenity Alexandra Marie
Nicknames: None
Birth date:6/7/1992
Age:14
Power: Can fly with her angle wings. Can heal people’s wounds. Can take the vapor from the air and form it into anything she wants(shield, sword, spikes, whips, and magnifying the sun to form a blast are the things she taught herself to do so far). No one can see these vapor formations either because vapor is invisible.
Appearance
Eye Color: Whole eye is either dark blue or light blue
Hair Color/Look: Light blue or dark blue
Height: 4’ 10”
Weight: 113 lbs
Other Characteristics: Very small, slender body. Wears either white or blue skits with a top to match or a white or blue dress. Has a dark blue bow that she only takes out occasionally, but she always has it somewhere where she can put it on.
Personality
Favorite Foods: Spaghetti and French Fries.
Fears: Gunfire. What people think of her(has a VERY low self-esteem).
Goals: To be able to have true friends that don’t use her for their own good. To help anyone that needs help.
Likes: To baby-sit young children. Hang out with friends. Help friends with their problems if she can.
Dislikes: Seeing guns, hearing guns.
Talents: Knows archery and fencing.
Habits: Bites her lip when she is nervous. Also may chew her nails too.
Reputation: none for now
General Personality: A quiet girl with a soft, high-pitched voice. She is kind of shy at times, but once she knows someone real well, she is talkative. Very nice, kind, and sweet girl. She is the kind of gentle, innocent girl that you just want to hug all the time. She can also be clumsy at times.
Family
Parents: Jade Raquel Marie(Mother) and Alexander Frank Marie
Siblings: Faith Alexandra Marie
Other Relatives: No where to be found.
History
Childhood: Serenity had a loving mother, father, and sister. They were a peaceful, happy life. She had wonderful friends and a wonderful school. She was living a normal life until age of 10. It all began on the night where the moon was bright as a diamond. She came home that night from hanging out with her friend all day. Their family ate dinner and they all went upstairs in the family room to play Uno, that was their favorite game to play together. They all were playing happily until they hear an explosion near their door downstairs. Quickly, Serenity’s mother hid her in one closest and her sister in another. Serenity’s father came rushing up the stairs with a gunshot wound in his arm. All of a sudden, three men come running upstairs with guns in their hands. They had a nasty, evil smile on their faces. They quickly shoot the father twenty more times, leaving him looking like a piece of Swiss-cheese. Now the three men raped her mother and shot her twenty times too. There was so much blood on the floor that Serenity almost threw-up. Then the three men came heard a noise coming from the closet that Serenity’s younger sister was in. The three men opened the closet, tied her up and rape her until she bleeds to death. The three men then take all the money the parents had and leave the house. When Serenity walks out of the closet, she sees that her mom wrote something on the floor in blood. “Look in the bottom drawer.” Serenity, still terrified from the incident, she goes into her mom’s room, opens the bottom drawer, and finds a dark-blue hair bow with a letter written on it. “This is for you serenity. I love you.” She put the bow in her hair and her long silky light-blue hair turned into a short, dark-blue hair style. She heard a noise downstairs and it was the three men. The three were still inside the house and were coming back upstairs to look around. They found Serenity and they started walking up to her. She holds up her hands and screams. Suddenly, the three men were laying on the ground, dead. They each had a 12-inch whole in the middle of their body. She had used her powers that she gained to throw vapor spikes at the three men. Serenity, not knowing what to do, runs away. She lives by herself until she hears about ravencorre and decides to live there with other people like her. She still thinks that she could’ve stopped her family from dieing. (There will be more details of the history when I write a story about it =D)
Most Embarrassing Moment: When she was at school and a boy bumped into her and they kissed by accident.
Happiest Moment: Each night when their family would go upstairs and play a family game.
Life Changing Experiences: When her family died and she had to live by herself for four years.
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So that's it. I will also post a story about the second character in this section of the forum as well. As I look back at this, I wasn't the best writer but I definitely want to improve myself.
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first character
Full Birth Name: Kiyoshi Scott Cole
Nicknames: Kee
Birth date: September 4, 1993
Age:15
Power
Appearance
Eye Color: light-Blue
Hair Color/Look: medium-length white hair with light-blue highlights. Athletic with light-brown colored skin.
Height:5' 5"
Weight:155
Other Characteristics: Crossed-shaped scar on his right arm. Knows martial arts and can handle a Katana pretty well
Personality
Favorite Foods: Grilled cheese and LOVES Swiss-rolls
Fears: Afraid to get to close to anyone because he fears he might not be able to protect them from their future. He is terrified of fire.
Goals: To try to find a way to change the future for the people he loves if they are in danger. Also to try to find his father.
Likes: Grandpa, friends, quiet and peaceful places, nature, and sparring.
Dislikes: People who think they are better than everyone else.
Talents: Awarded, “Best youngest fighter” in his hometown.
Habits: Stutters when he is around girls.
Reputation: in his hometown, he is known as one of the best fighters but in the town he lives in now, he is known just as an average, quiet boy.
General Personality: Very quiet and keeps to himself. Kind, gentle, and peaceful. Has a VERY hard time talking to girls. He is always focused on what he does and helps out the needy whenever he can.
Family: His Guardian, Jacob (he calls him grandpa), just recently died.
Parents: Mom is dead, dad is not to be found.
Siblings: Maybe...
Other Relatives: He might have a brother out there somewhere…
History
Childhood: Kiyoshi’s hometown is very archaic. His mom died instantaneously when he came out of her womb. The dad proclaimed that his boy was cursed and placed him on an old guy’s doorstep. This old guy, named Jacob, raised him and called him Kiyoshi because he was always quiet and kind. Jacob, being a master at martial arts, trained Kiyoshi to be strong so he could protect himself. At age 5, Kiyoshi woke up one night and told Jacob that he had a horrible nightmare that he saw millions of birds flying south and then their whole town perished from a storm of fire. Jacob thought nothing of this and they continued their lives training everyday. When Kiyoshi was around 13, he told Jacob he started seeing events happening ahead of time and noticed they started coming true. One day, Jacob saw endless amounts of birds going south. Jacob remembered Kiyoshi’s dream and rushed Kiyoshi to go out of town to get some special items that only the other town. Kiyoshi obviously forgot about the dream he had when he was little and thought of this trip as nothing. Jacob handed him a list of items and Kiyoshi left. When Kiyoshi got to the next town, he read the list that Jacob gave to him. It read “Continue to use your powers to protect the ones you love. Destiny will show you the way. I always loved you Kiyoshi and always will. You‘ve made me so proud. Stay strong my boy. Goodbye.” Kiyoshi ran as fast as he could to get to back home. When he arrived to the outskirts of his town, he saw that fire was coming from the air. As his town was being burned to the ground, all he could do was stand and watch and wonder why these things were happening to him. Suddenly, he remembered seeing this in his dream when he was little. He clutched the piece of paper that Jacob wrote to him close to his heart and walked away…in tears.
Most Embarrassing Moment: When a girl tried to help him up after he fell on the street. He ran away, blushing and ran into a wall.
Happiest Moment: When his grandpa would take him fishing.
Life Changing Experiences: When had to move to the next town…its more advanced than his ever was.
second character
Full Birth Name: Serenity Alexandra Marie
Nicknames: None
Birth date:6/7/1992
Age:14
Power
Appearance
Eye Color: Whole eye is either dark blue or light blue
Hair Color/Look: Light blue or dark blue
Height: 4’ 10”
Weight: 113 lbs
Other Characteristics: Very small, slender body. Wears either white or blue skits with a top to match or a white or blue dress. Has a dark blue bow that she only takes out occasionally, but she always has it somewhere where she can put it on.
Personality
Favorite Foods: Spaghetti and French Fries.
Fears: Gunfire. What people think of her(has a VERY low self-esteem).
Goals: To be able to have true friends that don’t use her for their own good. To help anyone that needs help.
Likes: To baby-sit young children. Hang out with friends. Help friends with their problems if she can.
Dislikes: Seeing guns, hearing guns.
Talents: Knows archery and fencing.
Habits: Bites her lip when she is nervous. Also may chew her nails too.
Reputation: none for now
General Personality: A quiet girl with a soft, high-pitched voice. She is kind of shy at times, but once she knows someone real well, she is talkative. Very nice, kind, and sweet girl. She is the kind of gentle, innocent girl that you just want to hug all the time. She can also be clumsy at times.
Family
Parents: Jade Raquel Marie(Mother) and Alexander Frank Marie
Siblings: Faith Alexandra Marie
Other Relatives: No where to be found.
History
Childhood: Serenity had a loving mother, father, and sister. They were a peaceful, happy life. She had wonderful friends and a wonderful school. She was living a normal life until age of 10. It all began on the night where the moon was bright as a diamond. She came home that night from hanging out with her friend all day. Their family ate dinner and they all went upstairs in the family room to play Uno, that was their favorite game to play together. They all were playing happily until they hear an explosion near their door downstairs. Quickly, Serenity’s mother hid her in one closest and her sister in another. Serenity’s father came rushing up the stairs with a gunshot wound in his arm. All of a sudden, three men come running upstairs with guns in their hands. They had a nasty, evil smile on their faces. They quickly shoot the father twenty more times, leaving him looking like a piece of Swiss-cheese. Now the three men raped her mother and shot her twenty times too. There was so much blood on the floor that Serenity almost threw-up. Then the three men came heard a noise coming from the closet that Serenity’s younger sister was in. The three men opened the closet, tied her up and rape her until she bleeds to death. The three men then take all the money the parents had and leave the house. When Serenity walks out of the closet, she sees that her mom wrote something on the floor in blood. “Look in the bottom drawer.” Serenity, still terrified from the incident, she goes into her mom’s room, opens the bottom drawer, and finds a dark-blue hair bow with a letter written on it. “This is for you serenity. I love you.” She put the bow in her hair and her long silky light-blue hair turned into a short, dark-blue hair style. She heard a noise downstairs and it was the three men. The three were still inside the house and were coming back upstairs to look around. They found Serenity and they started walking up to her. She holds up her hands and screams. Suddenly, the three men were laying on the ground, dead. They each had a 12-inch whole in the middle of their body. She had used her powers that she gained to throw vapor spikes at the three men. Serenity, not knowing what to do, runs away. She lives by herself until she hears about ravencorre and decides to live there with other people like her. She still thinks that she could’ve stopped her family from dieing. (There will be more details of the history when I write a story about it =D)
Most Embarrassing Moment: When she was at school and a boy bumped into her and they kissed by accident.
Happiest Moment: Each night when their family would go upstairs and play a family game.
Life Changing Experiences: When her family died and she had to live by herself for four years.
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So that's it. I will also post a story about the second character in this section of the forum as well. As I look back at this, I wasn't the best writer but I definitely want to improve myself.
