Post by zucpy on Apr 2, 2012 15:56:24 GMT -3
Okay, a little explanation is needed before I unveil the story. So I used to role play quite some time ago and on my other role play site, we had to make characters and use those characters through different places on the schoolyard. There was an option of creating a story of our characters before they arrived at the school (which was called Ravencorre Gifted Academy). As the the title of the role play states, it was a school where gifted with some superpower you could create.
I have no idea where part 2 of my story went, but here is just a little example of my writing 4 years ago. I apologize for the poor writing that you are about to read haha.
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“So, I saw this cute guy at school and he starts looking right at me. I didn’t know what to do so I just walked away. I was blushing and everything. I was so embarrassed!” Serenity was walking down the street with her friends, their heels clapping on the concrete and their hair blowing in the wind. It was such a beautiful Friday evening in Hitsyugaya, with the sun setting down like a ball of fire, lighting up Serenity‘s dark-blue hair. The buildings are so high, that they seem to touch the sky. Maya, one of serenity’s friends, announced, “Wow, that is embarrassing. You couldn’t even say hi?”
Serenity puffed up like a balloon. “Like you could’ve done better!”
They continue to walk down the rough road until they reached Serenity’s house. “ Okay, I will see you all tomorrow at school. Bye,” Serenity declared. She waved her friends goodbye frantically as they all started walking away.
Serenity took her shiny, silver keys out of her back-pack and opened the door. She was greeted by a tall, slender man with short dark, brown hair and eyes. “Hey baby-girl! How was your first day in high- school today,” her dad said while giving her a hug and a kiss and the head.
“Oh, it was great! I am in all the classes with my middle-school friends so you know we are going to have a blast this year,” she pronounced, remembering about the embarrassing incident with the cute boy. She took off her little size 6 Vans off at the door and started striding down the hall, her socks creating friction with the rugged, brown carpet on the floor. As she arrived in the living room, she noticed a white, thin sheet of jagged paper with big, black words on the wooden table. It read, “Walt Disney World. Trip for four.” Serenity screamed, “Oh my Gosh! Were going to Disney World!!!”
Her father, putting his head on his rugged brown beard, exclaimed, “Yeah, I meant to hide that to show you later, but we are leaving this weekend and taking the whole week off. This way you kids can get some time off school.” Just then, a beautiful women with long, shiny blue hair with blue eyes to match. She explains, “No, it’s not that, you just want to save money because the tickets are cheaper when the kids are in school.” Everyone started laughing.
“What’s all the noise for,” asked a little short orange-haired girl coming down the creaky steps. When the little girl spotted Serenity, she ran up to her and hugged her tight. “Big sister! You’re finally home from talking with your friends. Can you help me with my fifth-grade homework later, its kinda hard. Oh, and maybe we can play something too,” she asked, still squeezing her sister.
Serenity, without breath, mumbled, “Yeah, sure Faith. Just stop squeezing me so hard. I can’t breathe.”
“Oh, sorry big-sister,” Faith smiled happily, as the whole family started to laugh again. “So, what is this I heard about Disney? What is that?”
“It is a big place that has lot of fun games and rides! There are so many fun things to do there and we are going there this weekend little-sister!”
Faith started to jump for joy and run hyperactively around the living-room. She shouted, “Yay! We are going to Disney! We are going to Disney! Yay!” Serenity plopped on the soft, brown cushion of the couch and released a big sigh and cut the 40” big-screen T.V. “I’m just so tired from hanging out with my friends all day.” Her dad walks over to sit next to her, but instead goes into the kitchen with their mom. She started frantically flipping through the T.V. station, trying to find something to watch. While Faith finally got tired and sat down on the soft couch too, Serenity found the history channel and started watching. The channel was talking about how crime-rate has increased over 30 percent in the last ten years. “Wow, that is crazy. Thankfully there is never any crime where we live,” she thought to herself as she started to smell the wonderful aroma of seasoned meatballs coming from the kitchen. “Are we are having spaghetti with meatballs,” she yelled loud enough so that her mom could hear her from the living room.
“Yes honey.” Serenity loved spaghetti with meatballs. It was her favorite family favorite dish. The loving aroma was getting so strong, that Serenity’s mouth started to water and she got even more hungry than she already was.
“Dinner time,” their dad shouted while he was setting the table. Then, all of a sudden, it sounded like there was a stampede furiously rushing into the kitchen. One could even look at a glass of water and see it ripple. It was Serenity and Faith storming into the kitchen ready to eat like a pack of starving wolves that haven’t ate in over three days. They hurried to their seats and were waiting for their parents to sit down with their food. Their mom flopped some spaghetti and meatballs onto their plate. The wonderful steam of the read, round meatballs and the sweet, swirls of spaghetti flew up into their noses as they furiously grabbed their forks, ready to dig in. As the two sisters are about to stuff their food down, their mother says, “We have to say grace first.” Serenity and Faith sighed when they heard the voice of their mother. They put their forks down and waited. “Father, we thank you for this food. We thank you for being able for us to buy this food and we ask You to take the impurities out of it. In the mighty name of Jesus…”
“AMEN,” the two sisters shouted, as they start stuffing their face with the hot, juicy meatballs. “The succulent taste of spaghetti with the addition of the sweet meatball is awesome! This may be the best spaghetti and meatballs you have made mother,” Serenity mumbled as she had meatballs stuffed in her mouth with a piece of spaghetti string hanging out of it. Even though the two were nice, young, and polite girls, they didn’t have any manners when it came to this dish. As the family continued eating, their dad speaks up, “I can’t wait to leave. I am excited because this will be our first time out of the country like this.” The two sisters ignored them as they were to much into the goodness of the meatballs. After the family got done eating, the sisters yammered simultaneously, “I’m stuffed!” They both had spaghetti stains all over their faces and Faith even had a spaghetti string still attached to her back somehow. “How’d that get back their,” she asked. Everyone started laughing.
“You know what time it is,” their dad explained. “It’s family time!”
“I love family time,” Serenity said.
“Me too,” Faith added. “So what are we doing tonight father?”
“Well, we are going to play UNO!”
“I love UNO! Come on guys, lets go,” Faith shouted. She started tugging Serenity up the stairs into the family room, the biggest room in the house. This room was filled with toys, a 60” T.V, a play station 3, a Xbox 360, and so many bored games that one couldn’t even count them all. The walls were painted white with cute little yellow smile faces painted all over them. As the family enters the room, they sit on four soft, different colored bean-bags. Serenity walks over to one of the two closets and reaches for the UNO game. She ends up getting on her tip-toes and stretches for the game because it is all the way on top and she is only 4’ 10.” She finally grabs it, and she gives it to her father. He starts to shuffle the cards with extreme haste. “Wow, dad. It never ceases to amaze me that you can shuffle that fast. You must be an expert shuffler,” Serenity said with exaggeration.
“Yeah, well your good ol’ dad here has been playing cards ever since he has been born and that has been ever since the 19th century. Ya know, I even beat Abraham Lincoln, the sixteenth president of the United States, in a game of poker. I never knew how he became president because he sure didn’t know how to play poker,” their dad explained. The whole family busted out laughing.
This is the kind of thing a perfect family does. They play around, tell jokes, and love each other. Serenity loved her life and loved her family, until this night, something awful happens.
The whole family hears a loud bang and their house door is blown away with explosions as three men in black clothes come in with heavy guns and ammunition…
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I hope you all enjoyed this somewhat!
I have no idea where part 2 of my story went, but here is just a little example of my writing 4 years ago. I apologize for the poor writing that you are about to read haha.
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“So, I saw this cute guy at school and he starts looking right at me. I didn’t know what to do so I just walked away. I was blushing and everything. I was so embarrassed!” Serenity was walking down the street with her friends, their heels clapping on the concrete and their hair blowing in the wind. It was such a beautiful Friday evening in Hitsyugaya, with the sun setting down like a ball of fire, lighting up Serenity‘s dark-blue hair. The buildings are so high, that they seem to touch the sky. Maya, one of serenity’s friends, announced, “Wow, that is embarrassing. You couldn’t even say hi?”
Serenity puffed up like a balloon. “Like you could’ve done better!”
They continue to walk down the rough road until they reached Serenity’s house. “ Okay, I will see you all tomorrow at school. Bye,” Serenity declared. She waved her friends goodbye frantically as they all started walking away.
Serenity took her shiny, silver keys out of her back-pack and opened the door. She was greeted by a tall, slender man with short dark, brown hair and eyes. “Hey baby-girl! How was your first day in high- school today,” her dad said while giving her a hug and a kiss and the head.
“Oh, it was great! I am in all the classes with my middle-school friends so you know we are going to have a blast this year,” she pronounced, remembering about the embarrassing incident with the cute boy. She took off her little size 6 Vans off at the door and started striding down the hall, her socks creating friction with the rugged, brown carpet on the floor. As she arrived in the living room, she noticed a white, thin sheet of jagged paper with big, black words on the wooden table. It read, “Walt Disney World. Trip for four.” Serenity screamed, “Oh my Gosh! Were going to Disney World!!!”
Her father, putting his head on his rugged brown beard, exclaimed, “Yeah, I meant to hide that to show you later, but we are leaving this weekend and taking the whole week off. This way you kids can get some time off school.” Just then, a beautiful women with long, shiny blue hair with blue eyes to match. She explains, “No, it’s not that, you just want to save money because the tickets are cheaper when the kids are in school.” Everyone started laughing.
“What’s all the noise for,” asked a little short orange-haired girl coming down the creaky steps. When the little girl spotted Serenity, she ran up to her and hugged her tight. “Big sister! You’re finally home from talking with your friends. Can you help me with my fifth-grade homework later, its kinda hard. Oh, and maybe we can play something too,” she asked, still squeezing her sister.
Serenity, without breath, mumbled, “Yeah, sure Faith. Just stop squeezing me so hard. I can’t breathe.”
“Oh, sorry big-sister,” Faith smiled happily, as the whole family started to laugh again. “So, what is this I heard about Disney? What is that?”
“It is a big place that has lot of fun games and rides! There are so many fun things to do there and we are going there this weekend little-sister!”
Faith started to jump for joy and run hyperactively around the living-room. She shouted, “Yay! We are going to Disney! We are going to Disney! Yay!” Serenity plopped on the soft, brown cushion of the couch and released a big sigh and cut the 40” big-screen T.V. “I’m just so tired from hanging out with my friends all day.” Her dad walks over to sit next to her, but instead goes into the kitchen with their mom. She started frantically flipping through the T.V. station, trying to find something to watch. While Faith finally got tired and sat down on the soft couch too, Serenity found the history channel and started watching. The channel was talking about how crime-rate has increased over 30 percent in the last ten years. “Wow, that is crazy. Thankfully there is never any crime where we live,” she thought to herself as she started to smell the wonderful aroma of seasoned meatballs coming from the kitchen. “Are we are having spaghetti with meatballs,” she yelled loud enough so that her mom could hear her from the living room.
“Yes honey.” Serenity loved spaghetti with meatballs. It was her favorite family favorite dish. The loving aroma was getting so strong, that Serenity’s mouth started to water and she got even more hungry than she already was.
“Dinner time,” their dad shouted while he was setting the table. Then, all of a sudden, it sounded like there was a stampede furiously rushing into the kitchen. One could even look at a glass of water and see it ripple. It was Serenity and Faith storming into the kitchen ready to eat like a pack of starving wolves that haven’t ate in over three days. They hurried to their seats and were waiting for their parents to sit down with their food. Their mom flopped some spaghetti and meatballs onto their plate. The wonderful steam of the read, round meatballs and the sweet, swirls of spaghetti flew up into their noses as they furiously grabbed their forks, ready to dig in. As the two sisters are about to stuff their food down, their mother says, “We have to say grace first.” Serenity and Faith sighed when they heard the voice of their mother. They put their forks down and waited. “Father, we thank you for this food. We thank you for being able for us to buy this food and we ask You to take the impurities out of it. In the mighty name of Jesus…”
“AMEN,” the two sisters shouted, as they start stuffing their face with the hot, juicy meatballs. “The succulent taste of spaghetti with the addition of the sweet meatball is awesome! This may be the best spaghetti and meatballs you have made mother,” Serenity mumbled as she had meatballs stuffed in her mouth with a piece of spaghetti string hanging out of it. Even though the two were nice, young, and polite girls, they didn’t have any manners when it came to this dish. As the family continued eating, their dad speaks up, “I can’t wait to leave. I am excited because this will be our first time out of the country like this.” The two sisters ignored them as they were to much into the goodness of the meatballs. After the family got done eating, the sisters yammered simultaneously, “I’m stuffed!” They both had spaghetti stains all over their faces and Faith even had a spaghetti string still attached to her back somehow. “How’d that get back their,” she asked. Everyone started laughing.
“You know what time it is,” their dad explained. “It’s family time!”
“I love family time,” Serenity said.
“Me too,” Faith added. “So what are we doing tonight father?”
“Well, we are going to play UNO!”
“I love UNO! Come on guys, lets go,” Faith shouted. She started tugging Serenity up the stairs into the family room, the biggest room in the house. This room was filled with toys, a 60” T.V, a play station 3, a Xbox 360, and so many bored games that one couldn’t even count them all. The walls were painted white with cute little yellow smile faces painted all over them. As the family enters the room, they sit on four soft, different colored bean-bags. Serenity walks over to one of the two closets and reaches for the UNO game. She ends up getting on her tip-toes and stretches for the game because it is all the way on top and she is only 4’ 10.” She finally grabs it, and she gives it to her father. He starts to shuffle the cards with extreme haste. “Wow, dad. It never ceases to amaze me that you can shuffle that fast. You must be an expert shuffler,” Serenity said with exaggeration.
“Yeah, well your good ol’ dad here has been playing cards ever since he has been born and that has been ever since the 19th century. Ya know, I even beat Abraham Lincoln, the sixteenth president of the United States, in a game of poker. I never knew how he became president because he sure didn’t know how to play poker,” their dad explained. The whole family busted out laughing.
This is the kind of thing a perfect family does. They play around, tell jokes, and love each other. Serenity loved her life and loved her family, until this night, something awful happens.
The whole family hears a loud bang and their house door is blown away with explosions as three men in black clothes come in with heavy guns and ammunition…
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I hope you all enjoyed this somewhat!
